spiral hearts

Have been painting on this piece ,but still i am not satisfied with it.I have been painting it over yesterday and the day before,and today I will change it again i think.Somehow there is no unity in it.The hearts are scattered all over the canvass and the colours are to dull.
I don't know if I will continue afther today or will put it aside for a while.Even though ,i would like some comments on it,maby you could help me out here.......

inside heaven......

Dag Lieve by Bibje

It took al long time,but I am painting again.
It's not going easy but I am inspired and that counts for something.My fathers sickbed and his dying almost killed me,and my two kids and my mom,so I had to survive....In order to comfort myself I painted my first work a week afther he died and that was the last til many months later.That painting is hanging in my livingroom,so we can see it and imagine him near.In this painting all my love for him shows, it goes beyond the grave,inside Heaven.I hope he still feels it there.
Above is the painting.